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Red ([personal profile] ex_citrinitas659) wrote in [community profile] damn_you_yoohoo2010-08-01 05:02 pm

Formatting issues.

Something I noticed...some scenes repeat! You're given a choice between talking to Atsuro or Yuzu on the first day, and the one you don't select pops up again with the same wording on the second. I suspect the same is true with Mari and Kaido.

Does anyone have idea on how to handle scenes like the above?

Also, I'm not wedded to any one particular way of formatting the script proper, so I'm open to recs on how to handle it.

Finally, if anyone has a translation of the drama CD handy, link me or copy/paste them, I'm interested in getting the full translation. I did find the beginning translated...oh wait, I've got it bookmarked. Let's see how DW handles Youtube.

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[personal profile] alaeaureae 2010-08-02 03:30 am (UTC)(link)
That...is a good point.

I think it's something we could handle more easily when we have all the scenes available, and then maybe rearrange them? Simply because it does feel kind of redundant to repeat them but it seems like something that could be better done when we do have everything available.

(Also how are the...people dying branches going to be handled?)
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[personal profile] strategist 2010-08-02 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
It's [personal profile] citrinitas on my RP account, I'm being responsible.

Yeah...I'm wondering if it'll be better to eventually have the day posts directly consist of the events which happens on that day and that day only, but include links to separate posts with these character scenes that can show up on multiple days. Tag the individual scenes with the days they show up AND characters.

You know, so Atsuro's speech about silicon valley gets a new post and is tagged with 'devil survivor script: 1st day, devil survivor script: 2nd day, character: yuzu, character: atsuro'
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[personal profile] alaeaureae 2010-08-02 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
I can see that getting a little confusing though, but I guess it would solve the problem? But the other thing is...using Keisuke as an example... if you do his event on Day 5, it's different if you gave Kaido the bag or not, right? Are both scenes going to be linked?

...Also depending on the choices the characters respond differently. How will that be handled haha... I only really noticed because I did write down a lot of Atsuro scenes but for the silicon valley one I had MC choose the option of "were they your age" which leads to a slightly different response.

...This is difficult. XD
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[personal profile] crossing 2010-08-07 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
Rather than rearrange everything and disturb the order we've got going right now, I favor the idea of just noting it at its earliest possible appearance and then linking back to it (if others point it out) when it appears elsewhere.

Also I've just realised that I'm four days late to this discussion. Oh well, I'm replaying.